Category A: 10 yrs and under
Winner: Arysha Haya Kanda, The British School of Kuala Lumpur
Through the looking glass I see, Dinosaurs roaming wild and free, And next there is a mighty bang, An explosion heard all through the land.
Petrified, afraid, I pull away in fright, But curiosity gets the better of me, And I feel as though I might…
A caveman hunts with a jagged spear, While a mammoth toots and trumpets in fear, The sabre-tooth tiger, strong and brave, Stays awaiting his prey in a gloomy cave.
A young girl, maybe as old as me, Suddenly jumped down an ancient tree, I followed her, twisting and turning, underground, But she stopped as she found… a pound!
Oh dear, Oh no I must have dropped it, Down this awful, great, dark pit! Just then, everything started to disappear, Caveman, mammoth and the spear.
Consumed in terror I turn and shriek, But, Oh, but it wouldn’t hurt to have one more peek! A new world takes shape around me, There is nothing, not a bird or a bee,
Suddenly, there is a loud, scary crash, And two soldiers appear before me, in a wild dash, Panting and panting they were clearly out of breath, Looking like they trying to escape from certain death.
They pushed right past, wheezing and shoving, And when I turned around I realised they weren’t bluffing! An army of thousands was headed this way, And they didn’t look like they wanted to play!
I tried to pull out but I was stuck! Oh, oh, what bad luck!
I wished and wished with all my heart, That I could really well and truly depart, A sudden bright glow engulfed my face, As the magic mirror took me to some other place…
19 Comments
aamzaf · 7 years ago
First to comment!
book_girl · 7 years ago
So beautiful!
sisi · 7 years ago
Second to comment!
pandacool · 7 years ago
good poems!!!
agentlord · 7 years ago
Long Poems!!!!!
graciewose · 7 years ago
amazing
natalija · 7 years ago
It has taken so much effort and time.
rainbow07 · 7 years ago
:)
sgadders · 7 years ago
awesome, love them
sisi · 7 years ago
Wow! Some of the amazing metaphors bring it to life.
redpikachu · 6 years ago
You can really see that they have edited them until they're perfect and they've put lots of time into it instead of sitting on their xbox or playstation or whatever and just pressing buttons. WOW! :)
coolgirl09 · 6 years ago
nice poems
coolgirl09 · 6 years ago
super long
pizza2727 · 6 years ago
I agree
dottywrite · 6 years ago
WOW
maevegall · 6 years ago
#amazing
hotdog07 · 6 years ago
these poems are beautiful!!!
hagrid · 6 years ago
As long as robots don't try and take over poetry like they are art, I'm fine. Some lovely poems above. Amazing!!!!!!!???
gwenrat · 6 years ago
Amazing ?